Tuesday, January 02, 2007

Magnetic Poetry Example


Sis used the Magnetic Poetry site, using the "Garden" kit to write a doggy-poem. She accidently left out one word "you," because she's tired, we guess, but it's still pretty nice and we thought we'd share it with you! Be careful trying that site, it gets a bit addicting (this is her 5th poem she made with magnetic words!). It should read:

"to my dog"

i believe in you,
my moist nosed dog

something special emerges
to protect me

you are as sacred as fresh fertile earth,
wild as the vines' secret song

you are my ancient sanctuary
a whispered dream
my only truth

11 comments:

Fu Fu said...

Hee. the Magnetic Poetry sure is fun..

~ fufu

Sunshade said...

That is so very sweet .......

Love nibbles,
Miss Sunshade

Boo said...

hey akira & shiro,

are you the new Marvin, the poet dog? oh, must get mom to write a poem for me one of these days. everydoggie has one.

wet wet licks

Boo

e said...

awww that is really sweet.
I'm a little inspired to write a little poetry for Fei, myself!
Thanks for leaving behind a message on Fei's blog. I agree, I'll go through hell if there is one just to be with my dog!
Love
Fei & E

Justin said...

Happy New Year Akira and Shiro!!

Wanna tell u that I have arranged for a Dog Of The Week Contest!. plz tell your Momma to check it.

Thank you.

Joe Stains said...

what a great poem! so nice!!

A&S said...

we're glad you like sis's poem! we found out if you go to http://www.magneticpoetry.com/play.html and then click on the bottom right java play button, you can also play with the Dog-lover kit online! you can't submit them though, because that's the older system. on the new one (where you just click on the "choose a kit" button, you can use the "garden" kit, and that has some words for dogs!

Tigersan said...

Me always love that magnetic poetry :) Me will need to get some more of those on me blog :) Cute!

Ender said...

What a poet! My Dad likes to do limericks and he could do one after another and so on, so maybe I'll just share that info with my mom!

Boo said...

hey busy bee!

wet wet licks

Boo

Ivy said...

oh how cool! i will haf to play wif that poetry site too!